Feeling bad.
Today my sister left for Guangzhou because she is gonna start her new study again.
I sent her off in the station.It is kinda sad to watch your family leaving the hometown to another city.
I don't want her to go .My heart feels empty and I feel like I am gonna miss her so much.
But mom said it is a part of growing up,you have to leave you family and live by your own.
Growing up seems a little bit stressful for me.Guessing it is the same for everyone.
Life is a maze,which is full of ups and downs.You will never be able to predict what will happen in the next munite,all we can do is to live in the moment and cherish everything we had.
Wish everyone good luck.....
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Feeling bad.
Today, my sister left for Guangzhou because she is gonna start her new study studying again.
I sent her off in at the station. It is kinda sad to watch your family leaving the your hometown to go to another city.
I don't want her to go. My heart feels empty, and I feel like I am I'm gonna miss her so much.
But My mom said it is It's a part of growing up, you have to leave your family and live by on your own.
Growing up seems a little bit stressful for to me. Guessing I guess it is It's the same for everyone.
Life is a maze which is full of ups and downs.You will never be able to predict what will happen in the next munite moment. All we can do is to live in the moment, and cherish everything we had have.
I wish everyone good luck.....
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For standard English writing, NEVER use 'gonna' or 'kinda' ... or any of the other text-message short forms -- 'wanna', 'u', 'ur', ' i ', etc. Those are only for when you are thumb-typing on your i-phone. Otherwise, pretty well written.
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That's very sad. I understand how painful it is for you to be apart from a member of your family. I also felt the same when I had to move away from my family for college as I was 17. I cried so badly; I felt like I just didn't want to live anymore, but like your mom said, that's life. Sooner or later everyone moves on. It will be hard at the beginning but eventually you'll get used to it, trust me. Back then we didn't have Skype though, (I'm not that old but we weren't into technology), but now we all do, so you can see each other on the webcam. I know it's not the same as seeing her in person but it will ease the pain a bit.
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I also would NOT suggest using 'gonna' instead of going to. "gonna" is not a word, and only written in things like text messages.
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