Used Car
Since we moving to US. for more than one month, we planed to buy a used car. I thought that if you don't have a car here you haven't legs. Today we went to a couple of dealers together with our 2 friends, who have experienced on choosing a suitable car. The first one was a BMW. It had good look and nice interior, but when our friend drove it he shook his head twice and said "What a heavy wheel!".
The second car was also not good. Its brake can not be banked on even if we pull up normally. The last one was a couple. It looked cool and new. Also the mileage was low. We didn't suppose to have a couple for daily work. After test our friends told us this one was the best till now. So we asked the dealer for its history detail and want to think about it. Unconsciously we spent the whole afternoon for looking after a good car. But got nothing! It is not easy. So just keep going and hope we can find something in the near future!
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Used Car
Since we moving moved to US, we have planned to buy a used car for more than one a month. I thought think that if you don't have a car here, you haven't legs. Today we went to a couple of dealerships together along with our 2 friends, who have experienced on with choosing a suitable car. The first one car was a BMW. It had a good look and a nice interior, but when our friend drove it he shook his head twice and said "What a heavy wheel!".
The second car was also not good. Its brake can could not be banked counted on even if we pulled up normally. The last one was a couple. It looked cool and new. Also Additionally, the mileage was low. We didn't suppose intend to have a couple for daily work use. After we tested it, our friends told us this one it was the best till now one yet. So we asked the dealer for its history details and want decided to think about it. Unconsciously, we spent the whole afternoon for looking for after a good car., but got nothing! It is not easy., so we just keep going and hoping we can find something in the near future!
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Tgif, I want to say: that car's brake was not good even if we pulled up normally. Can I say 'we can not bank on it.'? For 'a couple', I want to say 'a two-door car'. Sorry to let you confused. :)
Thanks for your good suggestion! 'Without knowing it, we spent a whole afternoon to look for a good car '
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Thank you James, it is really not easy. Thanks for your information. Actually, my friends also recommend a Toyota or Honda.
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I'm not sure what some of the words you have used. For example, what does it mean to bank a brake. Do you mean to set the parking brake? What kind of car is a couple? Do you possibly mean a coupe? A suggestion on word choice. Instead of 'unconsciously' use 'without knowing it'.
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Yes, looking for a used car can be difficult sometimes. I recommend you get a CARFAX report on the car that you like the most before you buy it. Also, test drive the car for a while before you buy, and try to take it to a mechanic to ask him if he sees anything wrong with it. You can ask the dealer or seller to fix something before you plan to buy it. For a used car, I would recommend a Toyota or Honda.
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