Corrections · 7
For a sunny day....
I wonder what is my purpose in life. After graduating, I found a good job that I loved, and had much time to travel with my friends. But sometimes, I sit alone at the corner of a coffee shop, look at people in the street and wonder what my main purpose is.
One day, I saw a scene in the street that I would never forget: there was an old woman carrying a bucket to beg for money (you can leave this out if you want) in the street. Many people gave her money but others did not. Poor her! Suddenly, I thought of my grandmother so much (or 'she reminded me a lot of my grandmother'). The beggar seemed to be the same age as my grandmother. I wondered where the beggar's family was and why they would let her alone to make a living in the street like this. She was a such miserable woman that I couldn't stop thinking about her future: what she had for dinner, where she slept at night (maybe in somewhere in the street :( ) and the day after ('tomorrow' doesn't work because you're referring to a past event) what she would do to make a living.
Maybe I am too sensitive, but I haven't stopped thinking about that scene from that day until now (or 'from that day on'). I am sure that there are so many miserable people like her in everywhere, even more miserable than her. What can we do to erase scenes like that from our lives?
Now, I know I will work hard for a better life for my family and try to have more time for them than I used to. My family is the most important thing in my life. I love them so much from the bottom of my heart.
I wish everybody in the world would always love their family and have much (I think 'enough' is a good alternative) time for them. You know, nothing in the world can stop them from loving you and making you happy. So, don't make your family sad about you.
P.S.: I appreciate your attention to my notebook entry and your time to correct it for me. Have a nice day everybody.
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