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"Desafío” is a Colombian reality show produced since 2004. One of things the more most important things is that the competition develops at sites near to the sea and in different cities of the world like, Colombia, Panama, Dominican Republic, El Salvador, Senegal and Morocco. Any Colombian citizen can participate in this show. Each year they select those who will be at the show through a casting that will test their strength, speed, skill, balance, strategies, values, commitment, teamwork, leadership, etc. The reality show is focused on the survival of the 24 participants, divided into 3 teams of 8 people, which are grouped according to their age generation or geographic region. Principally, these people should try to survive in conditions of scarcity of food, water, often outdoors without sleep in beds, and then they participate in group and individual battles, eliminating a participant weekly. Finally, the Colombian public decides the ultimate winner through their vote by sending a text message according to their personality, values, collaboration with their team, sincerity and physical conditions. It is one of the few reality shows I like because they have real competitions.
My composition
"Desafío” is a Colombian reality show produced since 2004. One of things more important is that The competition develops at sites near to the sea and in different cities countries of the world like, Colombia, Panama, Dominican Republic, El Salvador, Senegal and Morocco.* Any Colombian citizen can participate is in this show. Each year they select those who will be at in/on the show through a casting that will test his/her strength, speed, skill, balance, strategies strategy, values, commitment, teamwork, leadership, etc. The reality show is focused on the survival of the 24 participants, divided into 3 teams of 8 people, which are grouped according to their age, generation or geographic region.** Principally, These people should must try to survive in conditions of scarcity of food, water, and often outdoors and or without sleep in beds, and then participate in group and individual battles, eliminating a participant weekly. The weakest participant is then eliminated at the end of each show. Finally, the Colombian public decides the ultimate/final winner through their vote sent a via text message according to their personality, values, collaboration with their team, sincerity and physical conditions. It is one of the few reality shows I like because they have real competitions.
Very good entry!
*This seemed superflouous to me.
**To me, age and generation are the same thing.
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