Beautiful Sky

Yesterday, I took a picture of the sky..... I like to take photos because you can to capture beautiful scenery.... So, the sky had three colors: yellow, blue and red like my country flag... I think that is amazing.... I really like to be in nice places and take a photo.... I have more, if you want to see them.... Follow me on Instagram Shannesabalza....
See you tomorrow!

The dialogue is written in an informal way.  Review your use of capital letters.  Also, be cognizant of the flow of the passage.  The sentences seem cobbled together with different thought.  Try to make the paragraph flow.  

A Beautiful Sky

Yesterday, I took a picture of the sky. I like to take photos because you can to capture such beautiful scenery. So, the sky had three colors: yellow, blue and red like my country's flag. I think that is amazing! I really like to be in nice places and take a photo. I have more, if you want to see them... Follow me on Instagram: Shannesabalza. 
See you tomorrow!

Using "..." too much is not a good style for writing. It makes you sound vague and unclear.