Could you please tell me if this cover letter is correct ? :)

Dear Sir or Madam,

I saw with great interest on the website www.volkswage-karriere.de that your company offers internships. Therefore I am writing to apply for an internship at your company for a 6-month period, starting if possible in August/September 2014. ((I would be particularly interested in the sector of Controlling/Finance.)?)   ((I would be interested in the finance industry and financial controller job.) ?) ( "... the sector of Controlling/Finance...", doesn't make sense to me) ( Did you mean that you are interested in the finance industry and financial controller job?)  I believe that my background, training, work experience and education has prepared me for this job.

Currently, I am a student in the 4th semester of international business administration and foreign trade at Worms University of Applied Sciences. Our courses provide a thorough grounding in management principles as well as accounting and foreign languages. I could gain a lot of experience in financial accounting, cost and activity accounting and I have also very good knowledge with MS Office. In addition to that, I am a very conscientious and diligent worker. My organizational skills would be an asset to your company. As you can see from my Curriculum Vitae, my English is fluent and I have also good knowledge of other foreign languages.

During my three-year training period at Trigema, a clothing manufacturer, I was able to familiarize myself with the various departments of a company. This experience convinced me that I would like to pursue a full-time career in controlling or finance, after graduating from Worms University of Applied Sciences.

I am enclosing my curriculum vitae as well as my ((overview of marks)?)  (Sorry, I not sure what you mean by "overview of marks.") (Does "overview of marks" mean a copy of your academic record and grades?) and I would be happy to provide references upon request.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,



Daniel Eigner

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Could you please tell me if this cover letter is correct ? :)

Dear Sir or Madam,

I saw with great interest on the website www.volkswage-karriere.de that your company offers internships. Therefore, I am writing to apply for an internship at your company for a 6-months period, starting if possible in August/September 2014. I would be particularly interested in the sector of Controlling/Finance. I believe that my background, training, work experience and education has prepared me for this job.

Currently, I am a student in the 4 th semester of international business administration and foreign trade at Worms University of Applied Sciences. My course provided a thorough grounding in management principles as well as accounting and foreign languages. I have gained a lot of experience in financial accounting, cost and activity accounting and I also have very good knowledge in MS Office. In addition to that, I am a very conscientious and diligent worker. My organizational skills would be an asset to your company. As you can see from my Curriculum Vitae, my English is fluent and I also have good knowledge in other foreign languages.

During my three-year training period at Trigema, a clothing manufacturer, I was able to familiarize myself with the various departments of the company. This experience convinced me that I would like to pursue a full-time career in controlling or finance, after graduating from university.

I am enclosing my curriculum vitae as well as my overview of marks and I would be happy to provide references upon request.

I look forward to hearing from you

Sincerely,



Daniel Eigner

Encl.