Grandpa

The 6/1-14 my beloved grandpa (my dads dad) died.

On January 6th 2014, my beloved grandpa died. He was my dad's dad, and this is really hard for my whole family: we are all mourning his death. Friday of this week, on Valentine's Day, we will have his funeral. Today, I bought what I will wear. Tomorrow, my dad and I are going to make something to put on my grandpa's grave. We invited guests to a small gathering on Wednesday at our house. On Thursday, my big sister will arrive from out of town, each member of my family will get a hair cut, and I am planning on giving my parents a little gift. On the day of the funeral, my dad and I are going to load our car with soda, food and a big arrangement of flowers to bring to the church where the funeral service will happen. Then we will dress for the funeral.

I am going to take pictures at the funeral, and...everything is just so hard. I don't know who to turn to; I don't know where I can go to talk with someone who would just listen and try to understand me. This is really hard, since I was grandpa's little girl. 

Where should I go?

Grandpa

The 6/1-14 On the 6/1/14, my beloved Grandpa (my Dad's Dad) died. (Capital letters are used when these are names of a specific person) This is really hard for my hole famely whole family. And this week on Valentines day, on Friday it is his funeral. My hole famely are having a kind a brake a kind of break(?), and this week is the most sencetive senstive week.
Today I bought what I am going to wear on Friday. Tomorrow me and my dad my Dad and I are going to fix a thing put a gravestone, or put some flowers to place were where my Grandpa are is going to lay lie.
On Wensday Wednesday we are gettinghaving/receiving guests and we are going to do a fast thing have a quick service for the funeral. and On Thursday, my whole famely are getting is getting/will get a hair cut and I was planing of giving planning to give my parents a little gift, and Later my big sister is comming, and then on Friday me and my dad my Dad and I are going to get (or) pick up some soda soda in the car, get the big flower bouquets to the funeral and then get the food. Then we will go to the church to help out and then get dressed for the funeral. I am going to take pictures under of the funeral and...
everything is just so hard...I don't know who to turn to and were wher to go and just talk with someone who understands me and someone who would listen...This is really hard, sence since/because I was Grandpa's little girl...
So were where should I go?

This is pretty good! Just a few mistakes that keep coming up, but they're mostly minor. I hope the funeral went ok, and you found someone to talk to.