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Who am I? Third part
I think I am a very simple person. I only have a few ambitions such as as being able to make of making a living or can doing my little routines like having my daily diary cup of coffee, playing soccer or chess, talking to my friends, watching movies in the cinema and writing something now and again. Therefore, I do not need to buy a new car or a house. Although it is probable that my wife has a very different opinion. Anyway, she only has cravings for about new clothes.
Finally, I am tolerant, supportive, talkative, but a bit of an introvert. However, when I am in a good company I have a great sense of humour. The only things I hate are animal abuse, like bullfighting, the (I think you want to say the illegal trade of wild animals?) wild capitalism, and the indifference indifferent of people to in the problems of in society. There are too many people with their who pay too much attention on to celebrities or sports, but very few people interested in respect and fraternity.
Who am I? Third part
I think I am a very simple person. I only have a few ambitions such as being able of to make a living or can doing my little routines like having my diary daily cup of coffee, playing soccer or chess, talking to my friends, watching movies in the cinema and writing something now and again. Therefore, I do not need to buy a new car or a house. Although it is probable that my wife has a very different opinion. Anyway, she only has cravings about new clothes.
Finally, I am tolerant, supportive, talkative, but a bit introvert. However, when I am in a good company , I have a great sense of humour. [Company is uncountable when you mean people whom you meet and talk to.] (More info: http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/english/company?q=company) The only things I hate are animal abuse, like bullfighting, the wild capitalism, and the indifferent indifference of people in to the problems of society. (Indifference is a noun while indifferent is adjective. THE always comes with a noun.) There are too many people with their attention on celebrities or sports but very few people interested in respect and fraternity.
*It was a very interesting text and I liked correcting it and helping you. Enjoy writing and continue your nice journal. Good luck bro !!
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