The Snow~ It is snowing outside ,the world is white ,it is really beautiful ~share a picture with you ~^^ I think many brazilians are really kind ,thanks for recommending songs~^^ Thank you

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The Snow~ It is snowing outside ,the world is white ,it is really beautiful ~share a picture with you ~^^ I think many brazilians are really kind ,thanks for recommending songs~^^ Thank you every friends in italki ,hope you have a wonderful day~

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The Snow~

It is snowing outside, the world is white, and it is really beautiful. ~I've shared a picture with you ~^^
I think many Brazilians are really kind. Thanks for recommending songs~^^
Thank you all my friends in italki. I hope you have a wonderful day~

[Good job. You need to shorten your sentences and not put so many independent phrases together with commas.]

yes, it is so beautiful~^^

I've never seen snow. It seems to be magical :)

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