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I want to have a cute pet. I always go to the pet market,and play with many kinds of pets.Today ,I went to there again.I saw the cats,cats are may favorite pets,beacuse they are cute and clingy. When I feel sad,I wanna a pet who can stay with me ,although he can't speak, I can understand that he worried about me from thier eyes.However,my dad is a doctor, he don't like animal,and my mom said "you should be reponsible for him, you should be thinkful", yeah,I know if I have he ,I would have responsibility. BUT if I am not at home, they don't care my pet? I think the pets that I take back home,he is our family,he should be looked after by us, not only me.I hope they can said"YES"or"OK",she just say"you should be reponsible for him, you should be thinkful",I think I will also feel upset when I take pets back home.

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I want to have a cute pet.

I always go to the pet market,and play with many kinds of pets.Today ,I went to there again.I saw the cats,cats are may favorite pets,beacuse they are cute and clingy. When I feel sad,I wanna a pet who can stay with me ,although he can't speak, I can understand that he worried about me from thier eyes.However,my dad is a doctor, he don't like animal,and my mom said "you should be reponsible for him, you should be thinkful", yeah,I know if I have he ,I would have responsibility. BUT if I am not at home, they don't care my pet? I think the pets that I take back home,he is our family,he should be looked after by us, not only me.I hope they can said"YES"or"OK",she just say"you should be reponsible for him, you should be thinkful",I think I will also feel upset when I take pets back home.

 

I want to have a cute pet.

I always go to the pet store and play with many kinds of pets.  Today I went there again.  I saw cats, which are my favorite pets because they are cute and clingy.  When I feel sad, I want a pet that can stay with me.  Even though they can't speak, I know they worry about me by the look in their eyes.  But my dad is a doctor and he doesn't like animals.  My mom says "You should take responsibility for him.  You should be more thoughtful."  Yeah, I know if I had a pet, I would take responsibility for it.  But if I'm not at home, shouldn't they care for my pet?  I think the pets that I take back home belong to the whole family, so they should be looked after by all of us, not only me.  I hope they can say "Yes" or "Ok." My mom just says "You should take responsibility for him.  You should be more thoughtful."  I think I will also feel upset when I take pets back home.

 

From Chris: I'm not sure what word you are trying to say by using "thinkful."  You could mean "thankful" or "thoughtful," but neither really works in this story.  Here are definitions from www.collinsdictionary.com: 

Thankful: When you are thankful, you are very happy and relieved to have something, or that something has happened.

Thoughtful: If you describe someone as thoughtful, you approve of them because they remember what other people want, need, or feel, and try not to upset them.

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