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A heavy snow I came home from Tokyo this morning. The concert was great, and I met two girls who came alone there. We had dinner together and shared our excitement. They said that they also had no friends whose have a similar taste of music of them so that they always go to concerts alone. Listening to foreign music is not very common thing here. Because of that, meeting people who like the same music is the priceless opportunity. I'm going to Tokyo for a concert tomorrow again, but weather report says that a heavy snow will come tomorrow. Highways might be closed, so I'm really anxious about if I won't be able to arrive at the venue on time. Maybe I'll have to think of another way to go there. The concert was great, but now I'm too worried to bathing in the afterglow of the concert.

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A heavy snow

I came home from Tokyo this morning. The concert was great, and I met two girls who had gone came alone there. We had dinner together and shared our excitement. They said that they also didn't have any had no friends whose have with a similar taste of in music, of them so that they always go to concerts alone. Listening to foreign music is not a very common thing here. and, Bbecause of that, meeting people who like the same music is the a priceless opportunity.

I'm going to Tokyo for a concert again tomorrow again, but the weather report says that a heavy snow will come tomorrow. Highways might be closed, so I'm really anxious about if I'll won't be able to arrive at the venue on time. Maybe I'll have to think of another way to go get there. The concert was will be great, but now I'm too worried to batheing in the afterglow of the concert.

 

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