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I like surfing the Net, and I like net online chat very much. I can make friends with people from different countries. but However, my modem is slow. Downloading pictures really slows things down. Most of the pictures are just advertisements. I dont have the patience to wait for everything to load. I'm usually using the search engines to look up information. Every day, I read news on the Internet. The world is changing and there are always has a lot of interesting things happening. I know there are a lot of games worth playing, and their graphics are pretty cool, but my laptop sucks. I 'd better have need to get a 3d card.
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I like surfing the Net, and I like net chatting online very much. I can make friends with people from different countries. But my modem is slow and downloading pictures really slows things down. Most of the pictures are just advertisements. I don't have the patience to wait for everything to load. I'm usually using the search engines to look up information. Every day i read news on the Internet. The world is changing and there are always has a lot of interesting things happening. I know there are a lot of games worth playing, and their graphics are pretty cool, but my laptop sucks. I'd better have get a 3d card.
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