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Concert for kids The last concert I went was the past year, in a cultural center. It was a Rock concert for kids. I went with my wife and son. The hall was crowded of kids enjoying, dancing and singing. It Was playing the brother´s group of my best friend called Dhera Dun accompanied by Baluji, one of the best sitarists in the world: The goal of the concert was that kids had his first contact with the sitar, trying to make it were funny. At the end everybody had a good time. Once the concert finished, the musicians did invite to children to go up to the stage to try instruments and they ended up very happy and excited. Thanks everyone for corrections

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I don´t know how old are you, but someone who attends these concerts never becomes old. Neither anybody is old if attend to a Bach concert. Thank you very much. The corrections had been very useful, especially prepositions. I´m of luckily when I put them in their righ place. (sorry for the expression, I´m sure it will be badly built).
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Sounds like a lot of fun. I* am going to the ELO (Electric Light Orchestra) concert on the 14th. They are here in South Africa and I am really excited. Hopefully I will get to see Santana when he comes out here too. I am "a little older" as you can see, so my taste in musicians is also a little "older.
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Concert for kids

The last concert I went to was the past last year, in a cultural center. It was a Rock concert for kids. I went with my wife and son. The hall was crowded of  with kids enjoying themselves, dancing and singing.
It Was playing the brother´s group of my best friend My best friends' brothers' group was playing.  The group is called Dhera Dun and was accompanied by Baluji, one of the best sitarists in the world: The goal of the concert was that kids would have had his first  their first contact with the sitar, trying to make it were funny? enjoyable? fun?. At In the end everybody had a good time.
Once the concert finished, the musicians did invited to the children to go up to  onto the stage to try the instruments and they ended up very happy and excited.

Thanks everyone for corrections

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