hello, is there anyone can help me to correct this article? thank you so much On the other hand, consumerism not only had negative impact on consumer, but also had seriously damages in environment. One of the main environmental issue is animal issue which had been highly controversy for long time. Firstly, Cole and McCoskey (2013, p3) indicates that “The industrial, Concentrated Animal Feeding Operation (CAFO) practices of raising animals for food in confined quarters with lax restrictions on resultant pollutants are responsible for unsustainable resource use and significant air pollution and resultant climate change, water overuse and pollution, land degradation, arable soil erosion, fossil-fuel use, climate change, and biodiversity loss”. There is a extremely impact on a large scales ranging, even can be a global issue. The authors are clearly demonstrates the major point is that people take the expense of irretrievable to consuming meat, which let to badly environment for in stead. Although, consuming meat is relative necessary for people general live, which population has been growth fast in recent year. Secondly, if the issue above is still can be excusable, the following part can be say that should not necessary happened, which is species extinct issue. Take China for example, there is a article researched by Zhang, Hua and Sun (2008), “nearly 70% of mammal species in China are endangered because of hunting and habitat” (p1494). Furthermore, these are some survey about interviewee,“In the survey, 67.3% of the respondents believed that ornaments and ready-made clothes made from wildlife were beautiful”(p1505), and “among the 326 respondents who have had wild animal consumption experiences, light consumers account for 59.8%, medium consumers 28.7%, and heavy consumers 11.5%”(p1510). According to the survey, easy to know that majority of people in China had experiences of wild animal consumption, such as, utilities for clothing and for food, and some of them are extremely favourite in consuming wild animal. However, because of this kind of behavior, numerous amount of wild mammal species has sharply reducing, even become extincting. Particularly, people are not necessary to consumer wild animal, for replace, they can purchases artificial products or plant products. Unfortunately, the product like above always be cheap and public in the means of sustainability, and people behavior of consuming tend to purchase something scarce for express their standing and short hedonism. In short, people consuming behaviors might cause a