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Theodor Dreiser's Writing Harms Teenagers
A (maybe The if there is only one librarian who works at Omsk public Library) librarian in the Omsk Public Library refused to loan Theodor Dreiser's "The Financier" to a 16 year old girl (http://lenta.ru/news/2014/02/04/danger/ and http://omskinform.ru/news/63024?utm_source=dlvr.it&utm_medium=twitter). Motivation for that strange decision was "age restrictions". I don't know why, in the eyes of Omsk's "cultural" figures, Theodor Dreiser and Sasha Grey are phenomenons on the same level. For those who don't know Russian, there is a common saying: "we have sailed up, this is a white Polar fox".
[Sorry I forgot to highlight changes. Your writing is pretty good, but your use of prepositions needs a little work. I'd love to hear some further explanation of the Russian idiom as I'm not entirely sure what you meant.]
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