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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i am a chinese girl , also a senior student of english major. i am here for the purpose of improving my english. i would like to make friends with you here as well as develope a real friendship with you.

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Sen - always use capital letters when you write the name of a person, place, language, city, province, country and nationality.
And the pronoun "I" should always be capitalized - "i" is only OK in a text message.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself


i am a chinese girl , also a senior student of english major.
I am a Chinese (nationality) girl , also a senior student majoring in English (language).

i am here for the purpose of improving my english.
I am here for the purpose of improving my English.

This sentence is fine.  You could also write "I am here to improve my English". Both are correct and they are equal. 


I would like to make friends with you here, as well as develope develop a real friendship with you.

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