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The Widow woman (Ce mot est une exception en anglais, ça a une genre. Un homme s'appelle « widower » et une femme s'appelle « widow, » donc il ne faut pas dire « woman. »)
She was a very bad woman. This morning when she work woke up she saw a ghost. The ghost take took her into her future dead death. She saw her grave. Nobody in the cemetery nobody went to saw visit her. She was crying. The ghost saw her tears_: (il n'y a pas un espace comme français) "when you are selfish and you afraid frighten/scare people It's like that this_! Nobody want to see your face and nobody want to remember a bad person, even if this person dies_!"
The poor woman was crying a lot and she said "I am a widow, I lost my husband a long time ago. Exactly 28 years and 43 days ago. He was all for everything to me_! We were all morning going went every morning to the woods to look for water to give for to the people who lives to in the village. There is water just into this right inside the woods, nobody likes going there because it's very gloomy! One time he died because he was very sick, he had problem with is heart_! And when he died I changed a lot, and I've been a bad person, and I don't want to change_!" The ghost was touched by the story".
C'est une histoire très interessante ! Ça me fait plaisir de lire une histoire creative parfois. Très bon travail, ton anglais n'est pas mauvais. Et si tu veux me corriger, j'apprends le français. Je suis debutant de ta langue. :)
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