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oh,my. As I tried to reach out to shampoo while taking a shower, I found out that there were no shampoo left. Yesterday night, I noticed that it was running out, and thought to be going to go buy new one today. However, it completely slipped my mind! Your hair gets so squeaky once you wash it with a body soap, and I hate it, so I didn't end up washing my hair tonight. I'll go buy new one tomorrow morning and I'll wash it after I come home back.

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Hi Rio! I'm studying English and Japanese. I would love if you could help me with the japanese language. Cheers!
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Hi Rio! You write well, only made a few mistakes :D

oh,my.

As I tried to reach out to the/grab (either one is fine) shampoo while taking a shower, I found out that there was (use "were" if there is more than one. If it is not a specific amount, like "shampoo" or "money" then use "was" still)no shampoo left. Yesterday night, I noticed that it was running out, and thought I would be able to go buy a new one today. However, it completely slipped my mind! Your hair gets so squeaky once you wash it with a body soap, and I hate it, so I didn't end up washing my hair tonight. I'll go buy a new one tomorrow morning and I'll wash it after I come back home.


Good job! Next time don't forget your shampoo ^_^

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