Travelling Around The World!

Hi folks,
Today, I'd like to tell you about one of my principal interests: learning of (knowing) different cultures around the world.
Why am I so interested to learn about/know of other countries, other languages (langauges) and so on? I can answer you because knowledge of (knowing) other cultures broadens (open) the mind: it is just a fact, but that is not all.
I'm attracted by Eastern countries especially; their traditions (they) are so different from those of my own country. (traditional habits.)
English is the first foreign language I'm learning but my wish is to learn as many languages as I can. For example, I'd like to learn Spanish and French and I'm interested also in Hindi and in a lot of other languages! (but I don't think I will (to) learn all (each) of them!)
I like Italki because it allows me the opportunity to meet a lot of very good people from (in) all over the world.
I think that's all for today.

Good-bye! :))

Good writing. In the first three sentences you used 'know/knowing' several times so it would read better if you varied it a little by using different words such as 'learn/learning' or 'study/studying' or 'reading about' . Otherwise, I have just suggested a few amendments.

Travelling Around The World!

Hi folks,
Today I'd like to tell you about one of my principal interests: knowing different cultures around the world.
Why am I so interested to know other countries, other langauges and so on? I can answer you because knowing other cultures opens the mind: it is just a fact, but that is not all.
I'm attracted by to Eastern countries especially; they are so different from my traditional accustomed habits.
English is the first foreign language I'm learning but my wish is to learn as many languages as I can. For example I'd like to learn Spanish and French and I'm interested also in Hindi and in a lot of other languages! (but I don't think I want to learn eachall of them!)
I like Italki because it allows me to meet a lot of very good people infrom all over the world.
I think that's all for today.

Good-bye! :))

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Hi Kyos! I totally agree with what you wrote, and for the very same reason, I am attracted to the West. :) All the best with your English!