new year day in China

Recently ,most people in China have a day-off because of the Spring Festival. Yesterday I visited an interesting lantern show and a temple fair in Jingli , Wuhouci( they are famous resorts in Chengdu). Everywhere is filled with colorful lanterns. I like the atmosphere. It is just a special way in China to celebrate the new year's coming .

Hellloooooooo well done :) 新年快乐！

New Years Day in China

Recently, ( ,) most people in China have had a day-off because of the Spring Festival. Yesterday, I visited an interesting lantern show and temple fair in Jingli and (,) Wuhouci ( they are famous resorts in Chengdu). Everywhere was (is) filled with colorful lanterns. I liked the atmosphere. It was (is) just a special way in China to celebrate the new year's coming .

You should write the title with initial capitals. You have several instances where you have left a gap before putting the comma -you need to put the comma immediately after the word...eg... recently, and not recently ,....  In your first two sentences you were writing in the past tense but suddenly changed to the present tense, so you need to continue to use past tense verbs such as 'was' and 'liked' just as you used 'visited' earlier in your article. Glad you enjoyed the day.