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MY MUSIC Good morning! I woke up later this morning. I was very tired. Now a new day is coming and I am charged! I am listening music, I like to listen it. I love afro music, it reminds me to summer emotion. Last summer I went to Rimini and I had denced afro everyday on the beach!!! ohh it was wonderful! Near the sea, how memories with my love and my friends! I miss my life in Rimini, but I don't lose excuse to go back in this city. I love all musical genre, when I study I prefer to listen classical music, because it conferes me concentration, when I paint I listen music with words so I sing.

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MY MUSIC

Good morning! I woke up later late this morning. I was very tired.
Now a new day is coming and I am charged up!

I am listening to music; I like to listen to it. I love afro music, it reminds me to of summertime emotions. Last summer I went to Rimini and I had denced danced to afro everyday on the beach!!! Ohh ... it was wonderful! Near the sea, how such nice memories with my love and my friends!
I miss my life in Rimini, but I don't didn't lose my excuse to go back in to this city.

I love all musical genres; when I study I prefer to listen to classical music, because it conferes me helps facilitate my concentration, when I paint I listen to music with words lyrics so that I can sing along with them.

 

[I love music of all genres too. One of my favorite things to listen to when I study is Vivaldi's 'Four Seasons' ... it is beautiful. Thank you for this entry, and good luck with your music and your painting!]

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MY MUSIC

Good morning! I woke up later this morning. I was very tired.
Now a new day is coming and I am charged ready to go!

I am listening to music; I like to listen to music. I love afro music, it reminds me to summer emotion brings back memories from summertime. Last summer I went to Rimini and I had danced to afro everyday on the beach!!! ohh it was wonderful! Near the sea, how oh what memories with my love and my friends!
I miss my life in Rimini, but I don't lose haven't lost my excuse to go back in to this city.

I love all musical genres. When I study I prefer to listen to classical music, because it conferes me concentration helps me concentrate. When I paint I listen to music with words so I can sing along.

 

Good job! I fixed a few things that I thought made your writing more fluid. Good luck and let me know if you need help! :)

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