An unreal letter to practice my writing

Now I'm living in Valencia, I was born here and for me is one of the most beautiful cities in the world. But probably next year I am going to move to Barcelona for my job, and this letter is for you to get to know more about Barcelona.
Barcelona is the second city of Spain, it is bigger than Valencia, but less bigger than not as big as Madrid.
It's an espectacular city to visit. It's full of monuments, museums, markets and modern shopping centers. When you are in Barcelona, you have to visit Gaudi's buildings. He was the most important architect from Barcelona and he built an amazing modern architecture buildings such as "La Pedrera", "La Casa Batlló" or and a cathedral named "La Sagrada Familia". A lot of turists visit daily those monuments daily.
Barcelona is on the coast and (it) has one of the most importants porta of the Mediterrranean Sea.
The weather is really good because the winters is soft (not severe / not very cold) and is strange rare that when the temperature is falls bellow zero. The summers is very hot and all (most) people go to the beach to have a fresh bath (refresh).
This is a shorts introduction for of my new city. I hope like you like it and you are invited to visit me whenever you want.

Lots of love.

Raúl.


Hi Raúl!
Above are the few corrections that I was able to find.
I'm also in this ongoing process of learning English
Barcelona must be such a magical place!
Travelling to Spain is one of my plans for the future. 

An unreal letter to practice my writting writing: (not sure what you mean by unreal)

Now I'm living in Valencia, I was born here and for me is one of most beautiful cities in the world.

I was born in Valencia and still liver here because I think it is one of the most beautiful cities in the world.

But probably next year I goong to move to Barcelona for my job, and this letter is for you know more about Barcelona.

Next year I'm probably going to move to Barcelona because of my job and I'm writing this to tell you more about Barcelona. 

Barcelona is the second city of Spain, is bigger than Valencia but less bigger than Madrid.

Barcelona is the second largest city in Spain. It's bigger than Valencia but smaller than Madrid.

It's an espectacular city to visit.

It's a spectacular city to visit.

It's full of monuments, museums, markets and modern shopping centers.

Good job!

When you are in Barcelona you have to visit Gaudi's buildings. He was the most important architect from Barcelona and he built an amazing modern architecture buildings such as "La Pedrera", "La Casa Batlló" or and the cathedral named "La Sagrada Familia".

A lot of turist visit daily this monuments.

A lot of tourists visit this monuments every day. 

Barcelona is on the coast and has one of the most importants porta of the mediterrranean sea.

Barcelona is on the coast and is one of the most important ports of the Mediterranean.

The wearher is really good, becouse the winters are soft and is strange that the temerature is bellow zero.

The weather is really good becasue the winters are mild and it is rare that the temperature falls below zero. 

And the summers are very hot and all people go to the beach to have a fresh bath. 

The summers are very hot and people go to the beach to swim.

This is a shorts introduction for my new city. I hope like you and you are invited to visit me when you want.

This a short introduction for you about my new city.  I hope you liked it and feel welcome to visit me when you are here. 

Lots of love.

Lots of love,

Raúl.

Raúl

An unreal A fictitious/simulated letter to practice my writting writing

Now I'm living in Valencia. I was born here and for to me it is one of most beautiful cities in the world. But probably next year I am probably goong going to move to Barcelona for my job, and this letter is for you to know more about Barcelona.

Barcelona is the second city of Spain, it is bigger than Valencia but less bigger smaller than Madrid.
It's an espectacular a spectacular city to visit. It's full of monuments, museums, markets and modern shopping centers. When you are in Barcelona you have to visit Gaudi's buildings. He was the most important architect from Barcelona and he built an amazing modern architecture buildings such as "La Pedrera", "La Casa Batlló" or and the cathedral named "La Sagrada Familia". A lot of turist tourists visit daily this these monuments daily.

Barcelona is on the coast and has one of the most importants porta ports of the mediterrranean sea.
The wearher weather is really good, becouse because the winters are soft mild and it is strange unusual for that the temerature is bellow to be below zero. And the summers are very hot and all people often go to the beach to have a fresh bath.

This is a shorts introduction for of my new city. I hope you like it like you and you are invited to visit me when you want . feel free to visit me anytime you want.

Lots of love,

Raúl.

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Hi Raúl! All the best with English! I'm learning Spanish, although my progress is nowhere as far as your progress with English. Haha