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A longer car When I bought my new car, I was very excited and happy. But I weren´t aware to it was going to happen that day. This happened, unfortunately, when I parked at the first time. I heard a terrible sound that indicated I´ve crashed the car, the new car, against the wall. 'Oh my God! How is it possible?' I thought. Very simple: the new car is longer than the older one!!! Easy to see but very complicated to understand. The solution? Next day I went to the store and I bought a kit of sensors. This way, when I´m parking and I´m approaching to the wall, car beeps loudly and I know I have to stop inmediatly. I think it was a punishment because I laughed my wife each time she was parking. Now I know that I´ve to say nothing at all :|

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A longer car

When I bought my new car, I was very excited and happy, but I wasn't aware to of what was going to happen that day. It happened, unfortunately, when I parked for the first time. I heard a terrible sound that indicated I'd crashed the car, the new car, against the wall.

"Oh my God! How is it possible?" I thought. Very simple - the new car is longer than the old one!!! Easy to see, but very complicated to understand.

The solution? The next day, I went to the store and I bought a sensor-kit. This way, when I'm parking and I´m approaching to the wall, the car beeps loudly and I know I have to stop inmediately. 


I think it was a punishment because I laughed at my wife each time she was parking. Now I know that I need to say nothing at all. :|

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A longer car

When I bought my new car, I was very excited and happy, but I wasn´t aware of what was going to happen that day. This happened, unfortunately, when I parked for the first time, I heard a terrible sound that indicated that I had crashed the car, the new car, against the wall.

'Oh my God! How is it possible?' I thought. Very simple: the new car is longer than the old one!!! Easy to see but very complicated to understand.

The solution? The next day, I went to the store and I bought a kit of sensors(sensor-kit). This way, when I´m parking and I´m approaching to the wall, the car beeps loudly and I know I have to stop inmediately.

I think it was a punishment because I would laugh at my wife every time she would park. Now I know that shouldn't say anything at all/ that I shouldn't make fun of others. :|

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Great story, except for the car, of course. :)

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