Essay every day - [6] / [100]
It's sad that there is limit of notebook posts could be made a day, hence I couldn't submit my essay here yesterday :/.I'll need to skip this day
Do long distance relationships work?
Our world becomes more and more modern everyday due to new science researches. What's especially changed your world, is internet. According to some statistics, it seems that majority of people using internet at least once, for one hour every week. You can do variety of things there, and one of the most popular nowadays is chatting and talking with other people from other countries, so It's so easy to have long distance relationships, while in the past it was likely impossible. However, I'm inclined to believe that this kind of relationship doesn't work for some reasons.
Firstly, long distance relationships never completely work, because the communication between partners is not natural. They’re just talking using microphones, which slightly change their voices, in addition to this they usually can’t see each other. It’s obvious that partners just can’t have any serious relationship, if they don’t know a lot of important things about each other.
Moreover, how can partners love each other, if they can’t see each other at least once a week? In the best case, they can be very good friends, who tell each other about how it’s going for them, help each other. Having said that it’s just not natural and real that they may be in relationship.
Taking everything into consideration, I’m convinced that long distance relationships are impossible, long distance communication may evolve to friendship, mind you it’s enough to know what does his/her partner likes, what he/she usually is doing for something more serious.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 2
1
Essay every day - [6] / [100]
It's sad that there is a limit of (for) notebook posts(,) could be made a day (should be more than this), hence I couldn't submit my essay here yesterday :/.I'll need to skip this day. (I had to skip one day)
Do long distance relationships work?
Our world becomes (is becoming) more and more modern everyday due to new (not needed) science researches. What's especially changed your (our) world, is internet. According to some statistics, it seems that majority of people using (are using) internet at least once, for one hour every week. You can do variety of things there, and one of the most popular (activities) nowadays is chatting and talking with other people from other countries, so It's so easy to have long distance relationships, while in the past it was likely impossible. However, I'm inclined to believe that this kind of relationship doesn't work for some reasons. (reason)
Firstly, long distance relationships never completely (not needed) work, because the (not needed) communication between partners is not natural (normal). They’re just talking using microphones, which slightly change (changes) their voices (voice), in addition to this they usually can’t see each other (continued: when they talk). It’s obvious that partners just can’t have any serious relationship (are not able to have serious relationship), if (because) they don’t know a lot of important things about each other. (get to know each other well). (sorry couldn't complete it - need to go now)
Moreover, how can partners love each other, if they can’t see each other at least once a week? In the best case, they can be very good friends, who tell each other about how it’s going for them, help each other. Having said that it’s just not natural and real that they may be in relationship.
Taking everything into consideration, I’m convinced that long distance relationships are impossible, long distance communication may evolve to friendship, mind you it’s enough to know what does his/her partner likes, what he/she usually is doing for something more serious.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
