somthing about confident

confident (confidence) is kind of (of is not needed) by nature ，but not just by nature。 if we have a good society situation (not needed) and live better than others (live our lives better than others)， maybe we will be confident。

i (I) think dreams also make a person confident ，if someone has a broad horizon (in what? - need to be specific, sounds vague)，maybe he cares nothing in (preposition - about) the daily life， so (So) he is not nervous 。and maybe i should say if a person can act as normal in every condition， he is a confident person (good sentence)。
sometimes i read magezines (magazines) about super stars, the editior always say (says) some stars (are) full of (passion probably)  ,sorry ,dont know how to say that in english 气场。 it means they looks (look) confident and ...... i think its because they experised (practiced) a lot ,they dont care (inappropriate ending).
and  (you cant start a sentence with and) i am not satisfied with myself ,because sometimes i feel really shy and not confident (word of advice keep practicing your speechin front of the mirror - it develops confidence). i will work hard and get a strong (incorrect usage: awesome) dream .makeing my life full of energe (energy) is what i really should do ,cheers up.

recently, i heard a new song ,it says "you dont know you are beautiful, that is why you beautiful" so maybe some day you valued other things just like valueless ,you will got (get) them. and put yourself in a mormal (typeo error) condition ,have a peace mind (have peace of mind).  - please let me know whether my feedback was useful. The corrections or suggestion are in brackets.