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swimming day Tomorrow after work I will go to the swimming pool. I paid a monthly fee that gives me the right to use the pool from monday to saturday at any time I want, but I didn`t paid for classes, so I swim freely without supervision, the downside is that I haven`t improved my way of swimming during this month (january). I don´t know why but I get exhausted so fast, maybe my breathing isn´t right. In february I think I going to take classes, is the best way to get better.

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swimming day

Tomorrow after work I will go to the swimming pool. I paid a monthly fee that gives me the right to use the pool from monday to saturday at any time I want,. However, but I didn`t paid pay for any classes, so while i can swim any time i want, I swim freely without supervision, the downside is that I haven`t improved my way of swimming skills during this month (January). I don´t know why, but I get exhausted so fast,; maybe my breathing isn´t right. In February I think I am going to take classes, since that is the best way to get better.

 

Note: "exhausted so fast" is perfect for speech or very informal writing. This is what people say in everyday conversations. The grammatically correct way to say this, however, is "...exhausted so quickly," and you should say it that way in formal writing.

 

Great job!

Sam

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