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There is always should be something strong inside of yourself. Today i have lost a lot of money and still feeling myself good and optimistic. There is always should be something strong, a hard stick or core inside of yourself, which will never let you to break. In a hard moments of life i always keep in mind all those great people who lived before me and their will and faith keeped them alive and afloat. Thought that all hard things in a life is given to us because we are able to go through them indeed and to become a little better. In some things there is no logic at the first sight. But one wise man has always spoken that there are always will be a good times after bad times and everything will pass away.

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There should always be something strong inside of yourself.

 

Today i I have lost a lot of money, and but I'm still feeling myself good and optimistic.

 

There is always should always be something strong inside of yourself, a hard stick steel rod or metal core which that will never let you to break.

 

[Note: "steel rod" and "metal" are used in English expressions to describe inner strength. Also used in expressions like "steely nerves" and "steely gaze"]

 

In a the hard moments of life, I always keep in mind all of those great people who lived before me and how their will and faith keeped kept them alive and afloat.


Thought I think that all hard things in a life is are given to us because we are able to go through them indeed and to then become a little better stronger.


In With some things there is no logic at the first sight. But as a one wise man has always spoken once said, that there are will always will be a good times after bad times, and everything will pass away turn to dust. [This is a common English expression.]

 

Good job! One thing to be careful about with written English is keeping the same "point of view" with the subjects of your sentences.


For example, in this essay:

(1) Sentence one is "first person," by using "I."

(2) Then sentence two switches to "second person" by using "you" as a subject.

(3) Then sentence three is "first person" by using "I."


When you are writing casually with a friend or emailing a coworker, it is not a problem to switch like this. But it is against the rules for formal writing: school essays, news articles, and anything official you write for a job.


Here are some tips I found online about the different points of view: http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/first-second-and-third-person


I hope this helped, and I hope tomorrow is better for you! :-)

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There is always should be something strong inside of yourself.

Today i have lost a lot of money and still feeling myself good and optimistic. There is always should be something strong, a hard stick or core inside of yourself, which will never let you to break. In a hard moments of life I always keep in mind all those great people who lived before me and their will and faith keeped kept them alive and afloat.
Thought that all hard things in a life is given to us because we are able to go through them indeed and to become a little better. In some things there is no logic at the first sight. But one wise man has always spoken that there are always will will always be a good times after bad times and everything will pass away.

 

P/s: Blue words may be errors. I'm not sure but I'll check and let you know soon.

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