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What would happen if...? When you think about society and meditates on how people spend their free time in different activities, maybe you realize that money it's more important than we believe. Then is when you mentally says the expression "If I were rich..." and immediately you starts to think about lot of crazy things (or maybe not too crazy) that you could do with money and life. So if I won a lot of money I’d probably get very crazy! First of all, I’m sure that a huge part of that money will be for my family, specially my parents, who deserve a comfortable life like they gave it to me. Another part of it maybe I'll save it for my future and the rest of it I’d try to spend it for that some of my little dreams comes true like traveling around the world with my best friends or buy a house where I could have a horse and ride it at weekends (I love horses!) and dogs, I'd have dogs everywhere! I don’t know, I’d can do a lot of things with all this money but If I hadn't anyone with I could share it, I'm sure that it would be very boring and that's exactly the point because... Where is the fun if you can't share it?

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What would happen if...?

When you think about society and meditates on how people spend their free time in different activities, maybe you realize that money it's is more important than we believe. Then is when you mentally says the expression "If I were rich..." and immediately you starts to think about lot of crazy things (or maybe not too crazy) that you could do with money and life.

So if I won a lot of money I’d probably get very crazy! First of all, I’m sure that a huge part of that money will would be for my family, especially my parents, who deserve a comfortable life like they gave it to me.

Another part of it, maybe I'll save it for my future, and the rest of it I’d try to spend it for so that some of my little dreams comes true,  like traveling around the world with my best friends or buying a house where I could have a horse and ride it at on weekends (I love horses!) and dogs, I'd have dogs everywhere!

I don’t know, I’d can I could do a lot of things with all this money but If I hadn't didn't have anyone with I could share it with, I'm sure that it would be very boring and that's exactly the point because... Where is the fun if you can't share it?

 

Very nicely done, you have excellent English.

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