a love story

When Peter read the message from his friend, he knew there was no time to lose. He had no time to lose. Perhaps it was the last chance to spend all his life with his beloved Kathleen.

That morning, she was reading the local newspaper when in the society section she read that the millionaire Andrew were was going to marry Kathleen. This was worse than going to the doctor and hearing that he had a mortal disease. But, he decided to fight. He put on his most elegant dress attire and shot off to talk to Kathleen.

He analysed the situation. He knew that she loved him although he was very poor. On the other hand, Andrew was ugly but very rich. He was sweating and nervous when she arrived to at Kathleen's house. She appeared and Peter told her: 'Don't make a mistake. You don't love him.' And she said. 'I'm sorry. I love you but I'm going to have a safer life with him.' Peter's heart broke in that moment and he was never happy. Neither was Kathleen.

Very nicely done.  I changed 'dress' to 'attire' because it sounded like he was putting on a woman's dress.