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An essay Hello friends! Thank you for all your corrections! It's really useful! *** Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? *** The reason whether or not computers impact on children more negatively than positively is a contentious one. In today’s world it is quite typical to a child to have their own computer at home. However, is it true that computers influence on children mostly negatively? I strongly disagree with this statement because computers play an essential role in children’s development. Due to computers children are able to study more effectively because it is known, that the key factor of successful studying is to be delighted during this process. There are many computer programs in the world which facilitate children’s development in a variety of directions. A good example of this could be the policy of education system in developed countries related to establishing computer facilities in schools. With regard to this, pupils have studied more productively. I also contest this argument due to the fact that nowadays it is impossible to imagine a computer without the Internet connection which has made a computer the biggest library in the world. It allows children to become more intelligent and also develops their world view. As a matter of fact, there is a lot of negative information in the Internet which has to be strongly prohibited for children but unfortunately it has still available for them. However, this issue can be tackled by implementation punishments for the Internet providers because of sharing inappropriate information for young users of the Internet. In conclusion, I would like to say, that despite of some negatives, computers have positive influence on children. Undoubtedly, computers can be harmful for children’s health as well but adults have to keep an eye on them to lessen the negative effects on children because of usage of computers.

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