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Sweden And My Aim
I have been living in Lund, Sweden for 9 months. I will go back to Japan in March.
Now it's time to start thinking about my new life, a new job and a kind of new real life.
Living in Sweden was like my deam.
When I was in Japan, I really wanted to stay abroad for as long as possible, so I was looking for a chance to go anywhere.
I didn't expect to live in Sweden two years ago, but I'm here now thanks to my professor at the hospital.
When I came here, I began to learn many new things and think about Japan, foreign countries, different cultures and so on.
My English is stiil not good, but I can say it's much betther than before. Besides, I could learn Swedish.
Above all, I started to like English and became interested in all languages.
I still don't know how to make long sentences in English, but I will keep studying.
I want to attend conferences in other countries in the near future. I will do my best :)
The life of Sweden and my aim.
I have stayed in Lund, of Sweden for 9 months. I will leave here on in March and go back to Japan.
Now it's time to start thinking of my new life, new job and a kind of real life.
The life of Sweden was like my dream.
When I was in Japan, I really wanted to stay abroad as long as possible and I was looking for into how to live somehow somewhere.
I couldn't expect to live in Sweden 2 year ago but I'm here now thanks to my proffesor at the hospital.
After I came here, I began to think and know I discovered many things.
Things about Japan, foreign countries, different culture, thinking(?), and so on.
My English is stiil not good but I can say it's much betther than before. Besides, English aside, I could learn Swedish also.
Above all,I became to like English and I'm interested in all languages.
I still don't know how to make long sentences in English. But I will keep studying.
In the near future, I want to attend the a conference in any other another countryies. I'll do my best :)
Lovely work - you clearly are very good at English. Just a few adjustments to help with readibility. Hope it helps ;-)
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