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Practicing with e-mails Hi Sarah How are you? I hope that everything is OK; it has been a long time since I had news from you! As you know, Christmas is around the corner and this year I’m going to pass it with my uncles in New York. Everyone says that NY is a magical city where you can live an unforgettable Christmas. I know that you’re going to study for your exams during Christmas but I was wondering if you can have a break for a couple of days and come with me to New York! I’ll talk with my uncles but I’m sure that they won’t have any problems about it! I hope you'll visit me one day and we’ll talk better about this. Best wishes,

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Practicing with e-mails

Hi Sarah
How are you? I hope that everything is OK; it has been a long time since I had news from you!
As you know, Christmas is around the corner and this year I’m going to spend it with my uncles in New York. Everyone says that NY is a magical city where you can experience an unforgettable Christmas. I know that you’re going to study for your exams during Christmas but I was wondering if you might have a break for a couple of days and come with me to New York! I’ll talk with my uncles but I’m sure that they won’t have any problems with it!
I hope you'll visit me one day and we’ll talk more about this.
Best wishes,

 

Excellent work! :)

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Practicing with e-mails

Hi Sarah,

How are you? I hope that everything is OK; it has been a long time since I have heard any news from you!
As you know, Christmas is around the corner, and this year I’m going to spend it with my uncles in New York. Everyone says that NY is a magical city where you can have an unforgettable Christmas. I know that you’re going to study for your exams during Christmas but I was wondering if you could take a break for a couple of days so you could come with me to New York! I’ll have to talk with my uncles but I’m sure that they won’t have any problems about it!
I hope you'll visit me one day and we’ll talk more about this.
Best wishes,

 

Very nice e-mail Patry! :) Keep up the good work!!

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Practicing with e-mails

Hi Sarah
How are you? I hope that everything is OK; it has been a long time since I had any news from you!
As you know, Christmas is around the corner and this year I’m going to pass spend it with my uncles in New York. Everyone says that NY is a magical city where you can live an unforgettable Christmas. I know that you’re going to study for your exams during Christmas but I was wondering if you can could have a break for a couple of days and come with me to New York! I’ll talk with my uncles but I’m sure that they won’t have any problems about with that it!
I hope you'll visit me one day and we’ll talk better more about this.
Best wishes,

 

buen trabajo !!!

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