A bad day

Yesterday, when I prepared while preparing dinner for my family, my forefinger was I accidentally cut by myself my index finger. There was much a lot of blood coming from the wound and it hurt. I felt hurt. At first, I thought I lost a forefinger-joint and was became scared. After looking at it carefully, I relized saw that I lost a small piece of flesh as equal as 1/3 nearly one-third the size of a fingernail. I It hurt all last throughout the night. This morning, I took an efferalgan to relieve the pain. I am saddened by my carelessness. My index forefinger will now be ugly. Being a girl, I hate it so much:( I have to do almost everything by with just my right arm now.
I hope that my wound will be good heal soon. I will be much more carefull with the knife from now on. It is an remembered important lesson learned.

But I look forward to your correction. Tks so much!

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Hello Holly! This was very well written! The only thing I would say is that the word "forefinger" isn't used as commonly as "index finger"!

Xin cháo bạn! Bạn viết tiếng Anh rắt hay! Thật ra là tự "forefinger" không có sự dùng thường như tự "index finger"!