How Technology Changes Our Lives (if you're interested: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Capitalization#Titles)

Most of us have real experiences with how technology makes our lives more convenient and easier, such as how phones help us save more(?) time by sending a message, and online chat gets poeple people closer in a virtual world even if they come from different countries.

But I think technology is occupying our real lives. It has shown this This can be shown in many ways (referring to 'technology' as an agent is a reification). When a group of friends get together and have a dinner or something, they might not be having a face-to-face conversation, but instead, be instand posting instantly on Twitter or Facebook; these people would rather connect with thier their friends by devices than have a real conversation. It makes them feel safe, because when they are texting, they can modify or delete whatever they write which means they can shape their image carefully.

So, we are hiding from each other. The images we created in the virtual world is are not the real us; they are the people we want to be. It can be matter affect our lives and take/get us into a fake realationship relationships.

Why we are we so obsessed with this these little devices in our pockets? Because u we can connect to others with this these devices and it which gives us the illusion we are connecting with others, that we are not alone, that we are heard; people are afraid of being alone. We will feel panic ('panic' is a verb) and feel anxious and worry if we are alone, That which takes drives us to those devices, but they doesn't help us to make a healthy relationships. When you connect with your firends friends to avoid to being alone, you are using them as tools to make you feel confortable comfortable; when you are in this situation, you can't really appreciate them. Only if/when you learnt to how to solitude be alone, will you know how to relate to orthers and relate to yourselves.

I don't want to be interrupted but I think I should be interruptted. Don't hesitake no hesitate any more! Be the real you! The friends who accepte the real you are the/your real friends, and they will stay with you when you need them.

I don't think I can be your friend since you write 'u' instead of 'you' :P

Please avoid changing the subject (you, we etc.) until you stop referring to it.

Put exclamation marks ('!') after imperatives.