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Should I introduce myself? Hi :) My name is Juliana and I am a brazilian high school student... Actually, my first year is about to start and no, I'm not very excited about it. Besides being my first year in high school, it's also my first year studying early in the morning, and I hate mornings! I'm more of a night-time kind of person. I really like learning new languages. I don't know why, I just feel like learning every single language I hear about! And I'm scared to take real-life classes because I can't deal with real-life people, so whenever I decide to learn something new, I decide to do it alone, with some useful help from the internet - oh, internet, where would I be without you? Now I decided to stop being such a messy person and focus on learning just two languages: english and korean (It must be really cool to watch korean tv shows without subtitles, hahahaha) Yes, I talk a lot about random subjects. I was wondering what I was supposed to write and now it doesn't even make sense... I'm just making you correct a fairly big text, sorry. I'm going to stop now and thank you very much.

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There really isn't much to correct; your grammar is quite good, though informal. It sounds more like you are speaking than like you are writing. "actually, I am about to start my first year" Don't begin sentences with "and" (i.e. And I'm scared to take real-life classes…") In this case, just start the sentence without the and: "I'm scared to take real-life classes…" "i decide to do it alone" - should be just "i do it alone" "Now I decided to stop…" change to "Recently, I decided to stop…" "It must be really cool to watch…" should be "It would be really cool to watch…" "fairly big text" should be "large amount of text" You are welcome! Sam

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