My first entry

Here I go with my first entry:.. My son and I went to see "Free Birds" "free birds" this afternoon., We really enjoyed the movie., it It was very funny because two turkeys travel back in time to get themselves off the menu for thanksgiving. We laughed a lot and had spend a good time.

Adriana - an excellent first entry. Just a few minor errors. A semi-colon at the start is more appropriate than the elipsis (...). The names of movies are always capitalized. Your writing will have more clarity if you do NOT rely so heavily on commas (,). Don't be afraid to make sentences shorter. (That is a good practice in any language). Ciao, Roberto

My first entry

Here I go with my first entry.. My son and I went to see "Free Birds" this afternoon. We really enjoyed the movie, it was very funny because two turkeys travel back in time to get themselves off the menu for Thanksgiving. We laughed a lot and had a good time.

All words in a title are capitalized in English. I'm glad you had a good timewith your son!

My first entry

Here I go with my first entry.. My son and I went to see "free birds" this afternoon. We really enjoyed the movie as it was very funny. It is about two turkeys who travel back in time to get themselves off the menu for thanksgiving. We laughed a lot and spend a good time.