"Fast Food"

During [over, throughout, in] the past 30 thirty years, the "fast-food restaurants" have been increased dramatically in Taiwan. Some laud its their convenient convenience, and say that they bring a new diet style to Taiwan. However, In this essay I intend to argue that fast-food not just only directly affects our domestic economy, but that it also poisons people’s our health.

First of all, the popular fast-food brands are usually is from some international companies such as "KFC" and "McDonalds." Once the international companies decide to entry one enter a specific country, the local restaurants providing the similar foods must be are affected. Moreover, as it they gradually become more popular, gradually rice is not solely choice for people anymore ceases to be the only food choice; which means that the domestic demand for rice demand will drop, down; as a result, impacting our the agricultural industry. might be influenced, too.

Further and even More importantly, those foods such as the foods that these restaurants serve (fried chicken, hamburger, and chips) are high in fat and sodium; which contain high fat and salt-might leading factors in high blood pressure, obesity, and heart disease. It is also serious to remind Another issue is that those international fast-food companies invest vast sums of money to make present joyful television advertisements on TV in order to attract children. For example: "McDonalds" emphasizes that they host birthday parties, and provide a playground in their restaurants to cater to children’s interesting interests. Having Growing-up eating fast food, people are likely to foster the develop poor diet eating habits through that last into adulthood. their adult lives.

By way of In conclusion, I believe that fast food indeed brings may be a "convenient choice" for eating to for modern people this generation, but we might lose may be losing something more valuable at the same time. We should pay more attention at how to fostering local industries and cultivating the correct diet choices conception of for our children.

Fast Food

In the past 30 years, the number of fast food restaurants have been increasing dramatically in Taiwan. Some laud its convenience and how it brings a new diet style to Taiwan. However, in this essay I intend to argue that fast food not just only affects the domestic economy directly but also poisons people’s health.

First of all, the popular fast food brand usually is from an international company, such as KFC or McDonalds. Once the international company decides to enter a specific country, the local restaurants providing the similar foods will be affected. Moreover, as it becomes more popular gradually, rice is not solely choice for people anymore, which means the domestic rice demand will drop down; as a result, the agriculture industry might be influenced, too. *You might want to think about rewriting the entire last sentence I don't exactly know what your trying to say*

Further and even More importantly, those foods such as fried chicken, hamburgers, and chips- which contain high fat and salt-might cause high blood pressure, obesity, and heart disease. It is also serious to remind you that those international fast food companies invest a lot money to make joyful advertisements on TV to attract children. For example, McDonalds emphasizes that they host birthday parties and provides a playground in the restaurant to cater to children’s interests. Having grown up eating fast food, people are likely to foster this diet habit through their adult lives.

By way of conclusion, I believe that fast food indeed brings convenient choice for eating to modern people, but we might lose something more valuable at the same time. We should pay more attention at how to foster local industries and cultivate the correct diet conception of in children.