Here is a Chance

I'm so happy to come here . Not only (i) can I practise my English , but I can also (i can) gain (my) teaching experience . I have dreamt of becoming (dreaming to be) a professional Chinese coach for a long time, (.) but (i) don't have enough experience. What's more , I love travelling (travlling) ,making new friends and getting to know different kinds of culture. ( ,) Here, provides (gives) me the opportunity (way) to achieve these aims. (make them come ture.) I want to make some friends so as to teach languages to each other . So cool to meet you.

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Otherwise, nicely written and a good introduction.

Here Is a Chance

I'm so happy to come here. Not only can I can practice my English, but also i can gain my teaching experience. For a long time I have been dreaming to be of being a professional Chinese coach for a long time. But I don't have enough experience. What's more, I love travelling, making new friends, and getting to know different kinds of cultures. Here gives me the way to make them these dreams come ture true. I want to make some friends to teach each other languages each other. It is so cool to meet you.

here is a chance

i'm so happy to come here . Not only i can can I practice my english ,but also i can also gain my teaching experience . I have been dreaming to be of being a professional chinese coach tutor for a long time .But i don't have enough experience. what's more However,i love travlling ,making new friends and getting to know different kinds of cultures ,here and italki gives me the way provides me with the opportunity to make them come ture. i want to make some friends to teach exchange languages with each other . so cool It's so good to meet you .