About my travel
Last year, I went to NYC for the first time with my friends. I visited one of friends who live in Brooklyn. I stayed there for 12 days, and I went to many places during my stay. Times Square, Broad Way, the Natural Historical Museum, Brooklyn Bridge... I had so good time there. I want to visited NY someday. Thank you.
Please help my English:)
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About my Travel
Last year, My friends and I went to NYC for the first time. I visited a friend who lived in Brooklyn. I stood there for 12 days. I went to many places in NYC. Such as Times Square, Broadway, Natural Historical Museum, And the Brooklyn Bridge. I had such a good time there. I want to visit NY again someday. Thank you.
Please help my English:)
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About my Travel
Last year, with my friends I went to NYC for the first time with my friends. I visited one of friends who lives in Brooklyn. I stayed there for 12 twelve days, and I went to many places during my stay: Times Square, Broad Way Broadway, the Natural Historical Museum of Natural History, Brooklyn Bridge... I had so such a good time there. I want to visited visit NY again someday. Thank you.
Please help my English:)
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