¿Is your town a good place for teenagers to live?

Hola, esta la redacción la hice para poder practicar inglés y me gustaría que alguien me la corrija. GRACIAS.


I think that Madrid is a marvelous city where youngsters can have an enjoyable time, due to the variety of activities.

For example, it has a large skating rink in the center. Teens have the possibility to go both in summer and winter, as it is covered.
As for the entertainment, there are sundry cinemas with the best movies, all the time. Moreover, Wednesdays you would get a discount.
Although the concerts are not very abundant, can be offset by retail stores where you can spend your evenings shopping at the endless clothing stores, jewelry... and all are quite cheap.
There is a pleasant atmosphere among the people. The festivities, never missing. That's the reason for their friendly air.

To sum up, Madrid is the ideal envirnment for youth to be free, and enjoy its simple modern place. That's why I like living here.