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discuss wether it is better to live in apartments or houses? Thank you for editing Today, heated debate has been going on about where to live, house or apartment. I will explore two main arguments often heard in this controversy. There are many reasons for some people to believe that living in a house is better than living in an apartment. First of all, gardener definitely would say yes to house as most of the house has its large garden. Moreover, the house has another advantage, which is its size. Needless to say, few people could deny that most cases the house has larger space than the apartment. This can be illustrated with the example of the number of rooms in the house. It is not surprised to see there are more than four rooms in the house. It also means that the owner not only can have normal function rooms, such as the living room and the bedroom, but also they could have other functional rooms, including table tennis room, gym, etc. lastly, the house is also a type of investment, which could help the owner to earn a large amount of money. For example, in china, the price of the house could be doubled within three years. On the other hand, I should admit that apartment attracts young adults successfully as its modern style. The obvious feature of the apartment is that modern apartment offer lots of fun spots in the building, such as gym, swimming pool and supermarket. Therefore, apartments definitely could win amount of consumers’ heart. However, the benefit should not be overlooked. In conclude, I would concede that there are advantages to living in apartments for their easy access to shopping center and gym. Despite that, the houses are spacious and worth to invest in. Overall, It is not easy to say which way is better. Personally, I prefer to live in the house.

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discuss whether it is better to live in an apartment or a houses? Thank you for editing

Today, a heated debate has been going on about where to live, in a house or an apartment. I will explore two opposing arguments often heard regarding this issue.

There are many reasons for some people to believe that living in a house is better than living in an apartment. First of all, gardeners definitely would say yes to living in a house as most houses have large gardens. Moreover, houses have another advantage, which is their size. Needless to say, few people could deny that in most cases the houses have a larger space than apartments. This can be illustrated with the example of the number of rooms in a house. It is not surprising to see that there are more than four rooms in an average house. It also means that the owner not only can have normal function rooms, such as the living room and the bedroom, but also they could have other functional rooms, including a table tennis room or gym, etc. lastly, the house is also a type of investment, which could help the owner to earn a large amount of money. For example, in china, the price of the house could double within three years.

On the other hand, I should admit that modern styled apartments are usually successful in attracting young adults. The obvious feature of the apartment is that the modern apartment usually offers lots of fun spots in the building, such as a gym, a swimming pool and a supermarket. Therefore, apartments definitely could win over a large amount of consumers. However, The benefits of an apartment should not be overlooked. (I don't think however suits here, as you have just been talking about the benefits of an apartment)
 
In conclusion, I would concede that there are advantages to living in apartments such as their easy access to shopping centers and gyms. Despite that, houses are spacious and worth investing in. Overall, It is not easy to say which way is better. Personally, I prefer to live in the a house.

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You make some good points but you need to be a little careful about when to use 'the' and when to use 'a.' I would prefer to live in a house too, but unfortunately houses in the city are too expensive! Let me know if you have any questions.

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