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An email for a friend! FCE practice :)
Hello Sam,
I am glad to hear from you that everything is all right. I will be happy to answer all of your questions in order to help you complete your project.
Firstly, I have to tell you that in our city, a rock festival is celebrated each summer, and it’s a great festival because it is full of great bands. A lot of people come here to have a good time, and I assure you that it’s amazing.
Describing the festival, I can say that it lasts three days, and it normally has ten different bands playing throughout the day and night, so you have to have a lot of energy in your body to get to the third day alive!
I would like to invite you to come to this festival because it has everything that you like about rock music and everything that it represents, so you shouldn’t hesitate to come here because you will have a great time in my city.
And of course I will be free at this time of the year, because in the summer I don’t have to study for college, so I will be free to be with you the days that you would be here.
I will wait for your answer.
Regards,
Isabel
An email for a friend! FCE practice :)
Hello Sam,
I am glad to hear about you and that everything is all right. (If he wrote to you, then it should be "glad to hear FROM you. If someone else told you that he needed help, then "hear about you" is correct) I will be happy to answer all your questions in order to help you to complete your project.
Firstly, I have to tell you that in our city there is a rock festival celebrated each year, in summer, and it’s a great festival because it full of great bands and a lot of people come here to have a good time, and I assure you that it’s amazing.
Describing the festival, I can say that it lasts three days, and it normally has ten different bands playing all day and night, so you have to have a lot of energy in your body to get to the third day alive!
I would like to invite you to come to this festival because it has everything you like, as it is rock and everything that it represents, so you shouldn’t doubt about coming here to have a great time in my city. (We say "have doubts ABOUT something", but simply "doubt SOMETHING" when using doublt as a verb)
And of course I will be free at this time of the year, because in summer I don’t have to study on college, so I will be free to be with you the days that you would come.
I will wait for your answer. (This is ok, but perhaps "I await your answer" sounds a bit better(
Regards,
Isabel
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