I'm very happy today!

Today is Monday.
I had a great time with my friends.
We went on a picnic and drank some beverage had some drinks.
We were happy to chat.
I met two new friends. One looks  is beautiful and the another looks cool.
One afternoon, we went the movie theater  cinema and saw a movie.
The movie was called Rush Hour.
We were liked it very much, because Jake Chen is a great actor.
Then we saw see you back at my house!

Hi, 

Be careful with the spacing of your punctuation. There are also some words you forgot to put the last letter on such as; beautiful and one. The last sentence was a bit confusing but I have put it into one sentence to make the meaning more clear.

Otherwise this was really good - well done! 

Hey, nice notebook entry :) I will just correct some minor errors but keep it up!

I'm very happy today!

Today is Monday.
I had a great time with my friends .
We went on a picnic and had some drinks.
We were happy to chat.
I met two new friends; one looks beautiful and another looks cool.
In the afternoon, we went the movie theater/cinema and watched a movie .
It was called 'Rush Hour'.
We liked it very much because Jake Chen is a great actor.
(Then we saw see you!) - Not sure what you mean here

Back at mine.