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Thanks for inspiring me On Saturday, I attended a workshop about parenting for ladies. The speaker shared her experience as a professional housewife who manages her family to have lot of achievements. She is Mrs. Peni Septi Wulandari (you can google it if you want to know her more, please :) ). I think everybody who knew her will agree with me that she is really a wonderful woman. Her husband is a full time worker. He asked her to not leave their children. So, she left her work to be a house wife. She doesn't want to be an ordinary house wife only but a professional one. With the time and process, she is success to be an inspirational woman from Indonesia.

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Thanks for inspiring me

On Saturday, I attended a workshop about parenting for ladies. The speaker shared her experience as a professional housewife who manages her family to have lot of achievements. She is Mrs. Peni Septi Wulandari (you can google it if you want to know more about her, please do! :) ). I think everybody who knows her will agree with me that she really is a wonderful woman.
Her husband is a full time worker (or: works full-time). He asked her to not leave their children alone. So, she left her work to be a house wife. She doesn't want to be just an ordinary house wife but a professional one. With the time and process, she has succeeded in being an inspirational woman from Indonesia.

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Very good work! Almost no errors at all. I'm glad you got some inspiration from this brilliant woman!

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