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Charlie
Beautiful sunny day! Well, today is such a beautiful sunny day. I'm working at a restaurant, and this morning I thought "It's gonna be a easy working day, people won't go to a department store in such a good day.(our restaurant is in a department store)" And I was right! Just few people came to our restaurant. But I'm glad that people enjoy the sunshine! :D

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Beautiful sunny day!

Well, today is such a beautiful sunny day.
I'm working at a restaurant, and this morning I thought, "It's gonna be a easy working day. People won't go to a department store in such a good day." (our restaurant is in a department store)
And I was right! Just a few people came to our restaurant.
However, I'm glad that people enjoy the sunshine! :D

 

[Good job.   Use 'but' as a conjunction between two phrases in a sentence.  Use 'however' to start an independent sentence.]

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