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day of rain I wakep up very early, whe open my eyes I see have been rained. It is a day cold, I goingo to use an umbrella all day. I need to wear a good coat, I hope the traficc it is not slow and complicated. You have a nice day.

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Day of rain

I woke up very early and when I opened my eyes I could see that it had been raining. It's a cold day and I'll need to use an umbrella all day and wear a good coat. I hope the traffic is not slow and complicated. Have a nice day.

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     I woke up [awakened, got up, arose] very early, and when I opened my eyes I saw [could see] that it had been raining [had rained, was raining, rained overnight]. It is a cold day, and I am going to use an umbrella all day. I need to wear a good coat, and I hope the traffic is not slow and complicated [hectic, busy, jammed-up, messy].
     You have a nice day [Have a nice day].

Luz, we needed to add "and" after some of the commas. Remember to check the tenses in the sentences after writing them; "when I OPENED my eyes I COULD see it HAD BEEN raining." Good Job, Luz.

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"complicated traffic" We wouldn't say that try bad traffic, congested traffic, snarled traffic. "I hope the traffic is not bad." Snarled and congested more used when writing. If speaking, it is simply "bad traffic".

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