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I wish you all will make an effort to find the truth about Fukushima (1/2)
I just watched the YouTube video called “Abita”—an award-winning animation that created a huge sensation over the world. It was directed by a Japanese college student girl who is pursuing her studies in Germany. This short animation depicts the aftermath of the remaining tragedy in Fukushima that was exposed to nuclear pollution since 2011. In a dramatic fashion, the animation convinced us that the area turned into a place where children have no freedom to play. Her genuine talent really enabled us to express the calamity, inciting viewers to become sympathetic towards Fukushima. Overall, the footage was beautiful and uniquely artistic as well. Regardless of my review of her great work, I want to give a heads-up to everyone: DO NOT take it as seriously as the way it’s shown.
すみません。しょさんの ふたつパラグラフが わかりません。
I'm sorry, Sho san, I don't easily understand your second paragraph.
Some advice I can give you with your blog entry is to write a little more simply. The longer the sentence is, the less impactful your thought is. For instance, connecting lots of thoughts together in one sentence may be better as two sentences. I understood your first paragraph, but in a lot of your sentences, I tried to shorten them and use more simple terms.
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