Introduction

I have written a small presentation for a job and want to know if it is well written. Could someone correct the correcting faults errors?

As a professional I have extensive experience and expertise in water rescue, prehospital emergency care and
coordination of equipment. I am able to work in a team, under pressure and in stressful situations.I
consider myself a responsible, decisive and sociable. I like to practice sports such as open water
swimming, climbing, trekking, and skiing. , ...

Beto: Pretty good job! I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "prehospital care", but in the context of what you've written it sounds like emergency training. In the U.S. we have EMT's (emergency medical tech's) which usually go out when an ambulance is called. That might be what you're referring to. Best of luck!

Introduction

I have written a small presentation for a job and want to know if it is well written. Could you correct any errors?

As a professional (I think this "As a professional" adds nothing to the sentence and could be removed, or else make it say something specific.  As a professional what?) I have extensive experience and expertise in water rescue, prehospital care and coordination of equipment. I am able to work in teams, under pressure and in stressful situations. I consider myself a responsible, decisive and sociable. I like to practice sports such as open water swimming, climbing, trekking, and skiing.

Introduction

I have written a small presentation for a job and want to know if it is well written. Could correcting faults?

As a professional I have extensive experience and expertise in water rescue, prehospital care and
coordination of equipment. I am able to work in team, under pressure and in stressful situations.I
consider myself a responsible, decisive and sociable. I like to practice sports such as open water
swimming, climbing, trekking, skiing, ...