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I just finished my graduate entrance exam . ,i do a bad work in math ,however ,i do well in other subjects .so i still have a chance to enter my dream university .during the time i prepared for the exam ,i was so exhausted everyday .for example ,i spent 5.5hours for math ,3 hours for major ,2hours for english and 2.5hours for politics in one day .everyday you feel so tired ,but you have to gret your teeth to preserve .bright further needs yourself to graz .
even though ,the exam has been finished ,actually ,i feel more tired .because you have nothing to do ,no goals ,no directions(i think this is the real awful things for a young man )
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I just finished my graduate entrance exam. I did a bad work badly in math, but I did well in other subjects, so I still have a chance to enter my dream university. During the time I prepared for the exam, I was completely exhausted every day. For example, I spent 5.5 hours on math, 3 hours on my major, 2 hours for English and 2.5 hours for politics in one day. Every day you feel so tired, but you have to grit your teeth to preserve a bright future for yourself after graduation.
Even though the exam has been finished, I actually feel more tired, because you have nothing to do - no goals and no directions. I think this are really awful things for a young man.
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