I hope I can tell you about the true China.

This is my second essay in the community. Thanks for to all the people who improved my first composition and pay paid attention to me. It is your encouragement mading that allows me to improve my English desirably. I will stick to writing an essay everyday. It will be about my life, my happiness, my sorrow, beautiful scenery about Beijing or other provinces of China, and the traditional culture about of China. I hope I can build a bridge between China and you, and I hope you can find out the real life of Chinese people.
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Great work. Some minor punctuation errors. Make sure to concentrate on the correct verb tense in your sentences. Nice flow and I am looking forward to reading your future entries. Keep up the good work.

I hope I can tell you true china

This my second essay in the community. Thanks for all the people who improved my first composition and payed attention to me. It is your encouragement that makes me to improve my English to the level I desire. I will stick to writing an essay every day. It will be about my life, my happiness, my sorrow, beautiful scenery about Beijing or other provinces of China and the traditional culture of China. I hope I can build bridge between China and you, and I hope you can discover the real life of the Chinese.
You are welcome to add my skype: renezhang11

[Good work.  Remember to put a space after all periods and commas.]

I hope I can tell you about the true China

This my second essay in the community. Thanks for to all the people who improved my first composition and pay attention to me/give me their time and attention. It is your encouragement mading that helps me to improve my English considerably desirably, and I will stick try to write an essay every day. It They will be about my life, my happiness, my sorrow, beautiful scenery; about Beijing or other provinces of China, the traditional culture about of China. I hope I can build a bridge between China and you, and I hope you can find out about/discover the real life of the Chinese people.
You are welcome to add my skype: renezhang11